March 5, 2009

My broken heart



my once diamond heart,
got trapped,glorified by you
to break as you left.

the sunlight eclipsed,
innocuous looking clouds
struck fatal lightning

glass shreds that became
beyond preserve or repair,
painted red by pain
.

17 comments:

  1. Heart and glass! I cant compare it enough! Im a little speechless today! IF I have a better comment I promise to come back! :D

    For now, ME <3 You!

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  2. wow...well prats...i am outta word too..your poetry is so perfect (or may b it is coz of n8 or lack of coffee :P )...
    jk
    hats of to u...:)
    2 gud

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  3. painted red by pain..

    can a heart full of pain be described any better.. your words make an image of most abstract of emotions Prats. and i adore you for that. muah! :)

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  4. Did I read it before somewhere? I dont know ... but felt like, I did ...

    and then, I would just like to know everything!!

    Haiku?

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  5. glad you read and commented raash.. you are anytime welcome to tell your views :)

    love you too !!

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  6. ha ha .. thanksie Gul... and its just a sudden flash wen words force themselves on paper .. nothing i do ... :)

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  7. Gosh that was really awesome prats di !

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  8. My pleasure to hear such good words from you kajal :)

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  9. yes tan, u have read the first of three haiku on my personal blog... i used it for my first naisaiku :) rest two i wrote new :)

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  10. See, I remembered!!!
    That means I read and I read passionately ... lol!! :) :) :)

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  11. hnnmm heart and our emotions.. its such a weird combination.. we cant seem to avoid them..

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  12. I'm happy
    I could impress thee,
    O Pretty Me....
    hee hee hee hee
    :) :)

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  13. there is nothing i can say... as superb as ever, nice flow of thoughts :)

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