
My faith put to test,
My heart beats no more,
I sleep in unrest,
As sorrow knocks on my door,
I know no comfort,
I know of no joy,
Each part of me hurts,
This pain, I want to destroy,
I wake up to a world of misery,
To a world of mistrust,
I am fed up of other's treachery,
And my feelings just lie and rust.....
And now my blood boils,
I feel different, I feel strange,
My inner self toils,
Now, I seek revenge,
I no longer feel weary,
I feel powerful, I feel strong,
I grow ugly, I grow scary,
To a different genre, now I belong,
Conceived in moments of distress,
From emotions shattered and torn,
From the womb of helplessness,
Now, the devil is born!!!!!!!
Dark!
ReplyDeletebut it touched my heart!
Its almost beautiful in a dark sorta way! Wonderful write! Likd it!
ReplyDeleteTotally gothy kinda poem... I hope you can come up with a continuation to this!
ReplyDeletegetting deep into the human psyche...i guess..good one...looks like i just read birth story of a Hellboy... nice comical fictional narration style...hope u continue on this :)
ReplyDelete@ illusion... yeah.. dark but true, a devil's hidden in each of us too!!
ReplyDelete@ maverick.. thanks... glad you liked it...
@ R.V and kings.... i doubt if i can... this one was instinctive