February 24, 2009

Comparitive Rhtym

It was yesterday,

I was entrapped in certain emotions,

They kept me clutched to my past.


It is today,

I have cleansed those confusions,

As I don’t want them to last.


It was yesterday,

I had so much to face around,

I even drifted apart from myself.


It is today,

My heart doesn’t feel bound,

I am in a place where joy is fenced.


It was yesterday,

I wished I could run away,

From the life which took a toll on me.


It is today,

My soul can breathe and sway,

I relive and sense that I am free.


It was yesterday,

Oh!

I am Euphoric it was YESTERDAY.

It is today,

WoW!

I am CONTENT it is TODAY.

6 comments:

  1. my my...coming across such poetry for the first time....comparitive rhythm...hmm...loved it...thats what i love about the lounge..teaches you so many things....at one place ;-)

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  2. "I wished I could run away,
    From the life which took a toll on me "

    I wished so **sighs** ;)

    really good one charz

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  3. i liked it ... noooo ... i LOVED it !! this is Me and my feelings put it words ..

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  4. wow wow..!! Wat a creative poem this is...!! Just blew me off really..!!

    Wonderful..!!

    It was yesterday,
    I had so much to face around,
    I even drifted apart from myself.

    It is today,
    My heart doesn’t feel bound,
    I am in a place where joy is fenced.


    I loved these lines...

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  5. It was yesterday,
    Oh!
    I am Euphoric it was YESTERDAY.
    It is today,
    WoW!
    I am CONTENT it is TODAY.


    yes i am.. :) lovely poem..

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  6. could relate to it word by word... Wondeful poem :)

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