February 27, 2009

Acrostic Poetry...

Here goes my second attempt,

Emotions

Embedded safely in a corner of my heart,they
move me to countless tears an laughter,an
ocean of intoxicating recollections and
treasure house of cherishing fantasies,
inevitable flowers of eternal fragrance
oblivious to the symphony of life,they are
nuggets of panacea,that urge me to
muster the sands of time.

10 comments:

  1. WOW!!! Too good, what a combination, earlier memories now emotions, couldn't get better than this.

    Each word and every line is too true. Well said :)

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  2. wow Mohita good one.. Prats has acrostified the whole lounge :)

    but my assignments are holding me back.. i am gonna come up with one soon though.. :)

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  3. thanks fr sharing this mohita... n m still waiting fr ur write kajal :)

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  4. out of the various acrostic poems here....i feel that this one stands .....nice use of words.....superb

    good luck
    pats on ur back :-)

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  5. @Kings
    I am glad that you remembered my previous poem too.
    Yeah,"Memories" and "emotions" are inter-twined.Each is incomplete without the other.

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  6. @Kajal

    Thanks.
    I agree.Its all because of Prats,that the lounge is brimming over with acrostic poetries.

    Anxiously waiting to read yours.

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  7. @Stephen
    Thanks. Coming from you,its an honour.

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  8. Mohita, your choice of words is delicious. I could almost taste it :)

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  9. agree with asbah

    commendable usage of vocabulary

    such a flowery language intensified the definition of emotion

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