February 24, 2009

Acrostic - My Try.


NOSTALGIA

Not very far away,
Over the cliff right next to the sea,
Stays the moments I've once lived.
Trapped in the cages of centuries,
Amalgamating the joys and grieves, they
Languish at the passage of time, yet
Glimmer sometime in my glimpse,
In moments of nostalgia,
And then the flicker is lost. Forever.


My past.
My life.
The moments I have once lived.


Unedited. First Draft. Please Rip it apart..

17 comments:

  1. The lost past can bring a smile or take a smile,

    And there is no ripping apart..its brilliant..

    And flicker is not lost..its a website..its still up..lol j/k

    Loved it asbo..like always :)

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  2. Golden words
    Once told
    Once read
    Deserves applause!!

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  3. Well, it reminds me of how the brilliance of a meteorite lasts. Just a moment, a flash, before vapourising into oblivion. And talking about life, it is said, we can live an entire lifetime in a few fleeting moments.

    Interesting... Keep writing!

    Peace.

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  4. Well, it reminds me of how the brilliance of a meteorite lasts. Just a moment, a flash, before vapourising into oblivion. And talking about life, it is said, we can live an entire lifetime in a few fleeting moments.

    Interesting... Keep writing!

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  5. Correction: (I am Unable to edit it here for some reasons)

    stayS the memories

    is Actually

    STAY the Memories!!!

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  6. we can only rip it apart when you provide us with an opportunity islexxxx....and when the emotions are so strong...the words are so deep...are heartfelt...how on earth can anyone rip them apart...it has your class stamped all over it islex ;-)

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  7. it was so insightful and brilliant .. was missing your poetry Asbah... :)

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  8. rip it .. yes i will... i will read it so mant times to remember each word written here .. to imbibe the feeling in myself .. and den i will say .. ahh!! perfect one dearie :D

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  9. Thankyou guys *tears In Eyes*

    You guys always make me want to write more!

    Pink I love u :P lol you saved my day!

    Prats. You made my day (night!)

    Guru hehe.. hoho... afterall u're my Guru! Apka jaisa guru hu jiska.. tu you know.. doomed to excel ;)

    Megha and Arjun, Thankyou :)

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  10. lovelyyy asbii...really a very good one...wow!
    n as twin said..ur class is stamped over it!! ;)

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  11. Not only is this good, I especially like the three lines at the end ... of the acrostic.

    Nothing is lost forever, just trapped in memories, and like a computer all of it can't be access at the same time.

    Thanks for joining the fun!

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