January 4, 2009

The thread of LOVe..

Girl o girl may I pucker the rosy lips of thou..
Through the seas of high valour..

On the voyage of love..
Doeth you come in my arms..

My damsel let your head rest..
Your eyes beholding mine..

Sound of scarlet, colors violets..
All cometh in your ways..

Thou fingers on my face so cold.
Just fills me up with glee..

Thou touch is so soothing..
All my pain just flees..

Thou smile lightens a million hopes..
Thou eyes are so deep and pure..

I may not want to drown in them
But I want to live in them for sure..

Sometimes near..sometimes far..
Sometimes with you I cant be..

But my love wherever you are..
Thou memories are always with me..

Thoughts of you grip my mind..
Words go dry my loves all pantomime..

You cometh into my heart.
Thou special place my valentine..

I hope to be blessed..
With thou lovely presence..

I hope we stay together..
I hope our love remains alive..

And we walk hand in hand through this life..


P.S.---This poem is not Created only by me,but with someone..

5 comments:

  1. Very good - simply written!

    "All my pain just flees.."

    Nice!

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  2. so sweet :

    But my love wherever you are..
    Thou memories are always with me..

    Thoughts of you grip my mind..
    Words go dry my loves all pantomime..

    You cometh into my heart.
    Thou special place my valentine..

    I hope to be blessed..
    With thou lovely presence..

    I hope we stay together..
    I hope our love remains alive..

    And we walk hand in hand through this life..

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  3. @ Charu,

    You know that sad place you were in... Well I'm in that place currently..So cynical little me hates this poem full of optimism.. When you just wake up in the dark and somebody opens the window, the light hits? Well this hits me... You remember that twisted poem ??? I tempted to do that again...


    All said and done..When I reread it in a better frame of mind... I liked it.Your style is something I shouldnt comment bcas as usual its brilliant..But I can see so much hope, love and beauty in this... :) Im getting used to the light :D

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  4. simple and well written...
    team effort pays off!! :)

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  5. yes chaarz, very beautifully written, it was so intoxicating :)


    thankyou for sharing!

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