I used to think life was all about being happy,
I used to think life was all about a smile.
But that day I knew that it was not true
and you realize this only when you are blue
In life came a point when I wanted to cry
And then came a point when I wanted to die.
But death was not my alley;
and life felt like an empty valley.
Yet there was light
Yet there was hope,
which taught me how to cope.
With time the wounds did heal
And soon the pain, I didn’t feel
I believe a new dawn will always rise
and happiness surely comes in disguise
jack this is the most beautiful poem written by u till date...straight frm the heart..so simly u told so much...i believe its true..time does heal a lot of wounds n make u forget the pain in the process. eventually u get wht was there for u..soooo keep trying
ReplyDeletelife is all abt hopes nd difficulties.....getting ahead in life is best.....there wil always be hope........nice post bro
ReplyDeletehey .. that was one of the best poem i read in this new year ... WoW !!! just lovely .. the pic suits the poem so much !!
ReplyDelete@nav
ReplyDeletehey thanks bro, i guess poems are usually direct from heart :)
yes you got it right times the best healer
@ ste
ReplyDeletethanks ste, in the end its only hope that keeps us going
hope for the best prepare for the worst :)
@ pretty me
ReplyDeleteoh thank you, but best is still to come lolzz, there's always room for improvement i guess
Very nice composition and very true to an extent.
ReplyDeletethanks tripti
ReplyDeleteSry for being late Jack..!!
ReplyDeleteMan, wat a beautiful poem....
A new dawn will always rise.. :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Let happiness come to us
ReplyDeleteand make our lives prosperous and bright.
Let us all come out of this darkness,
as He said, "Let there be light!"
Forgot to mention: Very nice composition Jack ... :)
ReplyDelete@arjun
ReplyDeletethanks man..ya after every night thers a new dawn..
:)
@tan
ReplyDeletethanks tan
well in times of darkness all we need is patience to wait for light
once that time passes theres surely a new dawn
nicely written jack....
ReplyDeleteloved the last two lines....
thanks vinay
ReplyDeleteglad you likes it