December 3, 2008

Twisted Dreams



When night deepens
to pitch black shades,
the dreams arise
in my smoky mind..
in shades of gray,
i see myself with you
hidden from each other
in wraps of hatred
for the love that once was,
for the wilted cares,
and the dead dreamland..

The mornings bring,
a smile to my face,
as i see you in my arms
i know you dreamed the same
coz we both pretend
to love each other still
to still care like before
but yearning ...to move on !!

5 comments:

  1. It got me to say..."Wow"...
    Amazing work I must say..touching

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  2. damn it... since i am so much in black i adored this piece. I love this phrase: Night deepens. i have used and re-used it again and over.

    and the lines in italic :)

    the end is awesome shruti!! wow !! breathtakingly beautiful..

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  3. thanks ani :)


    @ .a. : Glad you liked my work ,,,

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