"Rain, don't mask my tears... let him see the hurt, the pain, the anguish, the agony of the shattered heart that he's leaving behind..."
PS: Just got inspired by the few "really short" stories that have been posted here! My version is slightly lengthy (24 words); nevertheless, thought I could post it here!!
Short & Sweet..Very beautifully written..
ReplyDeleteCheers *PEACE*
yeah, short, sweet, true!
ReplyDeleteand every truth is beauty. John Keats says so :)
totally loving it, because it had rained today and i had cried!
ya..touching it is...painful more so...
ReplyDeletewell written neha..
painfully beautiful! :)
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What a statement...!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome..!! Very well written...
Cheers..!!
Arjun
short 1 sweet and very apt !! sometimes hurt and pain should not be hidden ...
ReplyDeleteSometimes I feel just bcas he doesnt care should I stop too? Why should I stoop down to his level of not caring. I loved him and still do.. Should I hurt him too?
ReplyDeleteRain,don't mask my tears...Beautiful!
ReplyDelete@ Rashi
ReplyDeleteI never said you stop loving him. Sometimes, it's necessary for him to see how much pain you are in, and you still love him so much... That's the beauty of love... one keeps loving despite the pain. Kinda stupid, ain't it? But then, who said love ain't stupid? ;)
yeah true!
ReplyDeleterite rite..how true!!
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