Come hold my hand,
gaze into my eyes,
Lets go for a walk,
under the starry skies,
Lets watch out of the window through the bars,
Look at the rustling leaves, count endless stars,
Lets dance on a tune, going on and on,
Lets be madly in love, till both of us are gone,
Lets run in the green meadows with a herd of sheep,
Let our love be divine, pure and like the ocean, deep,
Since the day you have knocked on my heart's door,
I love you my love, more and even more!!!!
September 7, 2008
I love you....
I am a happy go lucky girl and I like to take life as it comes...I am much of a thinker... I like to get lost in my thoughts... A dreamer and an aspirant, I dare to dream and I dont take failure to heart... I am moody at times... I like making friends... I love my family and my family means everything to me... I believe that life is never unfair to you... Just believe in God and you will never be sad in life!!!
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ReplyDeletegooooood...:)
ReplyDeleteits gr8 to see people happily in loVe..
hmm!! the start was nice, mid was good.. end is, well, a little disappointing!
ReplyDeleteoverall, nice.
come, Lets?
simple...but still touches the heart....i think the best part of this post is the simplicity with which you have put forth the emotions. As rightly pointed out by Asbah, the end seems a lil out of the place and rushed upon yar. The whole tone of the poem is based on "Lets" and then this sudden diversion towards teh ending two lines stand out like a rough edge. I know you would have something else in mind while ending. Am just giving you my opinion as a reader. Given your prowess on poetry, i expect a lot more from you. Cheers!
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