August 30, 2008

Let me keep the memories....

Let me keep the memories,
Of the day we first talked,
Down the lane of tender love,
As we both first walked...

Let me keep the memories,
Of the day you held my hand,
As we saw the setting sun,
And dug our fingers in the sand...

Let me keep the memories,
Of the day we had our first fight,
We decided to part ways,
And I stayed awake and cried all night...

Let me keep the memories,
Of the time we talked all night,
Of love and how much we mean to each other,
Till the sun shone and we saw daylight...

Let me keep the memories,
Of the day we played our wedding day,
We took our vows and exchanged rings,
Wasn't it so much fun all the way?...

Let me keep the memories,
Of when I had fallen ill,
And you were on my bedside all day long,
And had promised that you always will!...

Let me keep those memories,
For life has forced us to part our ways,
And though we can't be together any more,
These precious memories will always stay!!!

Dedicated to all those who ever felt the magic of being in love for the first time... and the pain of losing their first love!!!

8 comments:

  1. aww memories..

    they are sooo lovely to have.. no one's life is complete with out memories.. be it good or bad.. something which we always recall when least expected..

    its a lovely post..

    my post might interest u.. i had written something about memories in my personal blog.

    here's the link
    http://world-ani.blogspot.com/2008/08/memories.html

    do leave ur comments :)

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  2. Lovely Mona...I've always been ur FAN...so it was an AMAZING read...keep writing and harness the skills in u...U rock

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  3. well mona

    u seem to be a gr8 poetess

    let me keep my memories...its a good thing to do and u have written it in poetry form

    kudos

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  4. Let me keep the memories,
    Of the day we played our wedding day,
    We took our vows and exchanged rings,
    Wasn't it so much fun all the way?...

    The one verse that I really liked of the poem. Sometime we do play with the most vitals of life. I felt as if I were in love and lost my lover too :) you write well !

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  6. wowww...a beautiful poem...really!!
    u write tooooo well yaar...me already ur fan!!...awesome... :)
    emotional n touching!!

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  7. read ur other poems too..was forced to search 4 ur blog to read more...hehe...
    n i really loved d 'forever' poem der!! toooo gud..all of it!

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