July 22, 2008

AM i presenly in my PRESENT?

Exploiting my future
scribbling my past
BY THIS
am i suppressing my present??
Scrathing my past
itching my future
BY THIS
am i sacrificing my present??
Foreseeing promting of my destiny
controlling forces from my past
BY THIS
am i destroying my present??
Provocating my past
complelling my future
BY THIS
am i concealing my present??
Magnifying my past
risking my future
BY THIS
am i terrifying my present??
Expecting my future
in posession of my past
BY THIS
am i presently? not living my present?not leading my present??
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4 comments:

  1. Sandeep BalanThursday, July 24, 2008 1:05:00 PM

    wow...good one...suppressing, sacrificing, destroying, concealing, terrifying my present..u start of amazingly well and maintain the tempo throughout..."Expecting my future
    in posession of my past
    BY THIS
    am i presently? not living my present?not leading my present??"..the ending got a bit weak yaar...especially the last line...i think that you started off so awesomely well that i was expecting an even better finishing line...but great effort nonetheless...keep it coming...

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  2. DivitaThursday, July 24, 2008 8:31:00 PM

    beautiful!!
    perfecto!!
    intriguing!!

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  3. aqua gurlFriday, July 25, 2008 11:35:00 AM

    interesting and amazing!!!

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  4. AnonymousFriday, July 25, 2008 11:44:00 PM

    thanks for such comments n encouraging

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