July 27, 2009

Kuchh unkahee si...


...
Kya socha tha humne, aur ye kya hua
Unko to khabr hi nahi, koi deewana hua
Kya kaha humne, jo wo samjhe nahi
Kyon nazrein hai jhuki jhuki?

Deewano ki dar se
Hum to dur dur rehte the
Unke ghar se ho kar
Hum kabhi guzre hi nahi

Hum to taiyaar baythe the,
Aaj wo kehte hain, ke kaha kyon nahi
Wo to humare rah taqe baythe the
Puchhte hain unko lene gaye kyon nahi...

Hum to is chah me the ke
Bahon me le le unko,
Ek chhuwan ke liye wo taraste rahein,
Lekin kabhi kaha nahi...

Thanks for the time... People are missed when we are alone... (:

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6 comments:

  1. ViDiShAMonday, July 27, 2009 7:06:00 PM

    wowwwwwwwwww...!!!!..bahut accha hai Tan..last lines r wondrful..:)

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  2. TanMonday, July 27, 2009 8:48:00 PM

    Thanks ;)

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  3. AnonymousMonday, July 27, 2009 11:08:00 PM

    nice poem Tan
    but thod sudhar karunga
    "deewano ke dar se
    deewano ki dar se nahi"

    and third para thoda esa likh start main
    "hum to the tayarr unahe sunane apane dil ki baat
    hame nhi thi khabar k palake bichaye khade hain hamari raho main
    "

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  4. NyxTuesday, July 28, 2009 1:02:00 PM

    Amazingly superbo!
    I just loved it! :D :D

    And you said it right... people are missed when we are alone! :(

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  5. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, July 29, 2009 8:28:00 AM

    Barhiya hai Sirjee :)

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  6. TanFriday, July 31, 2009 5:49:00 PM

    Thank you guys..

    Chirag, thanks for the editing ...

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