Tu na itna kush ho aaj,
teri jeet itni aasaan nahi,
maana main khamosh hoon abhi,
par zindagi se hataash nahi..
Jo zakhm tune diye mujhe,
tu na unpar itna garoor kar,
har ek aansoo jo mera gira hai
us ki sazaa ka intezaar kar..
Aaj waqt mere saath nahi
par tera bhi vo gulaam nahi,
aaj khuda naraaz mujhse sahi,
par tere gunaah bhi maaf nahi..
teri jeet itni aasaan nahi,
maana main khamosh hoon abhi,
par zindagi se hataash nahi..
Jo zakhm tune diye mujhe,
tu na unpar itna garoor kar,
har ek aansoo jo mera gira hai
us ki sazaa ka intezaar kar..
Aaj waqt mere saath nahi
par tera bhi vo gulaam nahi,
aaj khuda naraaz mujhse sahi,
par tere gunaah bhi maaf nahi..
i don't wanna know who the dead guy is/ will be.. :O
ReplyDeletei dnt know myself for sure .. but i do hope "he/she" sufffers as much as me !
ReplyDeleteaweseme! its kinda...."And Vengenace Shall Be Mine!!!!!".....luvd it!
ReplyDeletei do hope dat person suffers! well written, Prats! :)
Read this with the help of Ste ...
ReplyDeleteI wanna say this to some ppl in my life.. :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
each line means a lot..
ReplyDeletei hope the person suffers ! nicely written
We should not wish the suffering of anyone, God will take care of that...
ReplyDeletetrue abhrii ....rightly said
ReplyDeletenice prats
ReplyDeletekisse gussa ho kar likhi hain ye
not abt suffering.. but abt realisation... :)
ReplyDeleteCheers..!!
Arjun
AB .. u know i never wish bad of anyone ... its jst a warning to ppl to fear God ... i m no one to ask for their sufferring :)
ReplyDelete@All : thanks for the read and commetns .. i jst wanted to take out my frustrations .. nothing more :)
ReplyDeletei got a derogatory and rubbish email from writers lounge email id. i m not sure if thats authentic....
ReplyDeletethe sender claimed to be STE....i dunno how true it is.
i knw dude,, ,
ReplyDeleteeven i getting such mails frm wl id and some other persons name...
still trying to find whz it...
i get such derogatory mails frm prats old email id......shitz.
bamble....forward me the mail to my id
whenever u get any such emails delete or ignore, common practise of a "fiend".what the person does not understand is earning so much ill-will from all of us won't do him any good. i dont know any way to stop it.so i guess best we could do is ignore him till he fucking realizes that it's of no use!
ReplyDeletealso work is on 4 getting to cyber police..will post updates as soon as the person gets caught...
i have got the IP address of the machine from which the email was sent. any way i could get that to you guys ?
ReplyDeletei got a mail in response to this poem of prats.....:0
ReplyDeleteabhri
ignorance i a bliss...but hw long cud u ignore....i guess v have to do something.....it has been reported to cyber crime mumbai...necessary steps nd action will be taken for sure.....
I guess i owe a heartfelt apology to be the cause of this trouble .. and a more heartfelt thanks to still let me be here amidst you .. truly saying people ,,, i wont be much without you and this home of mine !
ReplyDeleteya post the ip... lets hope the cyber people are from good colleges ;) keep ur fingers crossed
ReplyDeletesome seems 2b flared up ;)..
ReplyDeletewow..wonderful...bahut accha hai really gud..;)
ReplyDeletexcellent...evry time i read dis i wanna leave a comment this was great..!!
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ReplyDeletethanks all for the read !
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