tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post8560985407544749810..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: If you think, you can..Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-34421600315246928982009-02-04T10:45:00.000+05:302009-02-04T10:45:00.000+05:30This one can be composed into a song :) I was watc...This one can be composed into a song :) I was watching an episode of The Amazing Race on AXN after which I read this poem and it felt so apt for the series!Ashritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12953310989204748747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-65764025600880512902009-02-03T19:07:00.000+05:302009-02-03T19:07:00.000+05:30ste... gr8 goin...could have added more punch...at...ste... gr8 goin...could have added more punch...at some places de words were outta sync(meant rythm)...but the end idea was good...i think i can,,i say :)Kings Chaoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09428021846428512346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-85140014987406653092009-02-03T18:47:00.000+05:302009-02-03T18:47:00.000+05:30Superb mann .....If you think you can ...lovely li...Superb mann .....If you think you can ...lovely line :)Anuraghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02807534323931479616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-55580536942468088382009-02-03T14:56:00.000+05:302009-02-03T14:56:00.000+05:30stepCOCK....YES WE CAN....you are too good stepCOC...stepCOCK....YES WE CAN....you are too good stepCOCK...amazing one stepCOCK...u r really super amazing stepCOCK...too good stepCOCK ;-)<BR/><BR/>seriously...good one...i second prats...its an anthem kinds...bade chalo...bade chalo...keep it coming stepCOCK...Sandeep Balanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-4523197857311220562009-02-03T14:53:00.000+05:302009-02-03T14:53:00.000+05:30Nice one Mr.S :)Nice one Mr.S :)nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07585858660639235525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-56304881520138210782009-02-03T13:33:00.000+05:302009-02-03T13:33:00.000+05:30Simple and sweet..No frills and yet effective .......Simple and sweet..No frills and yet effective .... Nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-74928408585240885102009-02-03T10:57:00.000+05:302009-02-03T10:57:00.000+05:30This indeed is a brilliant write .. Simplr inspiri...This indeed is a brilliant write .. Simplr inspiring .. an anthem kind :)<BR/><BR/>but i found xtra words at some places.. poetry shud be bit precise.. leave out and, then n all at times to make it crisp .. found this at two places in ur poem ..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-44242508921209067622009-02-03T00:18:00.001+05:302009-02-03T00:18:00.001+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.I Zaydihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10156705691608858236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-26737439146502757072009-02-03T00:18:00.000+05:302009-02-03T00:18:00.000+05:30Wow! ste!its so beautiful!sach main its lovely!soo...Wow! ste!<BR/><BR/>its so beautiful!<BR/><BR/>sach main its lovely!<BR/><BR/>soo cuteee!<BR/><BR/>so wonderful...I Zaydihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10156705691608858236noreply@blogger.com