tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post5811859383692364993..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: Frozen In Ice....Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-5946789099552484752009-03-20T13:41:00.000+05:302009-03-20T13:41:00.000+05:30thanks "H" !! :) n its just a write.. m not sadthanks "H" !! :) n its just a write.. m not sadAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-38922278202239682172009-03-20T13:40:00.000+05:302009-03-20T13:40:00.000+05:30thanks for liking Kaings !! it was jsut a try ,,thanks for liking Kaings !! it was jsut a try ,,Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-15290929781184939292009-03-19T20:34:00.000+05:302009-03-19T20:34:00.000+05:30pure magic.. i could feel the chill!!pure magic.. i could feel the chill!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-77974672034398839502009-03-17T23:58:00.000+05:302009-03-17T23:58:00.000+05:30@Tan : i guess monorhyme means that the lines shou...@Tan : i guess monorhyme means that the lines should sound same... which i guess i have managed... will check again though later.. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-70466151991799460512009-03-17T20:31:00.000+05:302009-03-17T20:31:00.000+05:30Wonderful poem, Prats! livin upto ur reputation is...Wonderful poem, Prats! livin upto ur reputation is all i can say! :)Maverickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442002151797497705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-88093011156696315402009-03-17T20:19:00.000+05:302009-03-17T20:19:00.000+05:30And about the picture? You have an uncany crave fo...And about the picture? You have an uncany crave for the best picture, I believe! This is the second picture that you have used, which I have already used ... seems, our tastes are matching ... hope I can write as well as you, if I can match to your frequency!! I'm happy :)Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613642883793373191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-31271260979654493312009-03-17T20:18:00.000+05:302009-03-17T20:18:00.000+05:30Ah! Another Monorhyme ...I seem to be confused a b...Ah! Another Monorhyme ...<BR/>I seem to be confused a bit here, which is vivid from my try at this ...<BR/>But then, NIGHT, EYES, SMILES, NICE, DIE, CRIES ... is this what you wanted to say how it should rhyme at the end of each line?<BR/>I want to know that and get my doubts cleared off... tell me, Teacher ... I'm waiting for your reply...Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613642883793373191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-5453861873343927742009-03-17T18:30:00.000+05:302009-03-17T18:30:00.000+05:30ahhhh!!!!!! poetry princess!! :) :)beautiful one!!...ahhhh!!!!!! poetry princess!! :) :)<BR/>beautiful one!!!!!!!!Raghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11582137969459170533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-38005122794233544422009-03-17T16:05:00.000+05:302009-03-17T16:05:00.000+05:30it moved menothing worser than the death of a love...it moved me<BR/><BR/>nothing worser than the death of a loved one<BR/><BR/>nice write-upAparna (Life Takes)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10317107449181119426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-58852264537225668372009-03-17T15:07:00.000+05:302009-03-17T15:07:00.000+05:30Was a long and dark DecemberFrom the rooftops I re...<I>Was a long and dark December<BR/>From the rooftops I remember<BR/>There was snow<BR/>White snow<BR/><BR/>Clearly I remember<BR/>From the windows they were watching<BR/>While we froze down below<BR/><BR/>When the future's architectured<BR/>By a carnival of idiots on show<BR/>You'd better lie low<BR/><BR/>If you love me<BR/>Won't you let me know? </I><BR/><BR/><BR/>This song seemed to fit perfectly with your write.. I was just re-read it while listening to this song... :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-22609261185868220982009-03-17T14:30:00.000+05:302009-03-17T14:30:00.000+05:30why so sad? why so serious :P reading ur post almo...why so sad? why so serious :P <BR/>reading ur post almost felt like a rainy day :) U got ur effects righthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14659338327208506746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-57574023024660003432009-03-17T12:52:00.000+05:302009-03-17T12:52:00.000+05:30captured and froze de sad moment ;)a rhyming write...captured and froze de sad moment ;)<BR/><BR/>a rhyming write, but more importantly good choice of words in conveying the emotions :)Kings Chaoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09428021846428512346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-22414807888033446692009-03-17T12:23:00.000+05:302009-03-17T12:23:00.000+05:30ya.. feeling cold u see ;) (i meant feeling wise)ya.. feeling cold u see ;) (i meant feeling wise)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-68819230663229454782009-03-17T11:51:00.000+05:302009-03-17T11:51:00.000+05:30A cold write? ! ? !A cold write? ! ? !nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07585858660639235525noreply@blogger.com