tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post4735526867373637910..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: But it rained...Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-44690786215866029442009-01-02T23:59:00.000+05:302009-01-02T23:59:00.000+05:30I used to live quite close to tilak nagar police s...I used to live quite close to tilak nagar police station :)<BR/><BR/>your story is excellent, but used a lot of numbers and figures...<BR/><BR/>keep up the good work :)insanely~positivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00552209846403715644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-40520538457593704752009-01-01T19:43:00.000+05:302009-01-01T19:43:00.000+05:30Thats called a story telling,I can say you O'henry...Thats called a story telling,I can say you O'henry's shadow!!Picture fits with the story where the rain has some meaning..its a background score here and its really awesome.Do you have any personnel blog??do let me know!!<BR/><BR/>Keep posting n hope u wins the contest..inshaallaahAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355728313701413198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-72717317584695191822008-12-13T06:35:00.000+05:302008-12-13T06:35:00.000+05:30hmmm ... somehow I manage to find Bangaloreans who...hmmm ... somehow I manage to find <BR/>Bangaloreans who come from my place ...<BR/><BR/>I'm from Tripura ... and Staying in Bangalore since 2004 ... Nice to see you here <BR/><BR/>Sply for Hashan:<BR/><I>Moy bongaali ... Ahomiya janu ... </I> ;)Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613642883793373191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-33451511476271490712008-12-13T06:07:00.000+05:302008-12-13T06:07:00.000+05:30Well guys thanks for commenting..u say less scope ...Well guys thanks for commenting..u say less scope for rainfall,But intention was to say that rain is unusual in december for b'lore..it rained specially for hari,that ruined him..it rained on this biz,his hopes..kinda signal from god that his fellow hawker's prays are accepted..hehe..anyways glad that u guys liked the story!!<BR/><BR/>hey Tan, I am originally from Assam but from last 8years i m stayin in b'lore.hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-44569898319702992752008-12-13T04:38:00.000+05:302008-12-13T04:38:00.000+05:30Hi Hashan,This is Tan - a new member in the Lounge...Hi Hashan,<BR/><BR/>This is Tan - a new member in the Lounge ..<BR/><BR/>A Good one .. left in between - not incomplete though ...<BR/>It had everything ... from Finance to Corruption to Jelousy - but it did not have rain in it ... Alas!<BR/><BR/>Again no rule about English story .. so, no comments on that ...<BR/><BR/>Bangalore, December, Khara and Thilaknagar - you are obviously from Bangalore - someone from different place (- Assam?) .. but all the readers would not be from here ... might not relate ... but then, when people can mention foreign cities, why cant you? hmmm ...<BR/><BR/>Would have liked to have more rain in place of the profit margin - it was almost not required ... here, need to consider this 'almost' ... ;)<BR/><BR/>Hope you write more and we can read more of you ...<BR/><BR/>Cheers!Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613642883793373191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-65799663441738003592008-12-12T22:43:00.001+05:302008-12-12T22:43:00.001+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Rakib Ahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00088164905063186808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-84814156587841066432008-12-12T22:43:00.000+05:302008-12-12T22:43:00.000+05:30This surreally is a good story…. He really has the...This surreally is a good story…. He really has the creative mind to frame a story.<BR/><BR/>This surely is a very good post.... I loved it…!!!!!!Rakib Ahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00088164905063186808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-62899614590378503622008-12-12T19:16:00.000+05:302008-12-12T19:16:00.000+05:30i wonder why this post lacks comments.. hmm. reall...i wonder why this post lacks comments.. hmm. really liked that post. <BR/><BR/>I am such a fan of pani puri, and savour it with such delight that i wonder if i will turn into a pani puri myself one day :P hehe!<BR/><BR/>although rain has not a lot to do with in this story, but a background chore! I liked it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-9341400120052956152008-12-12T12:55:00.000+05:302008-12-12T12:55:00.000+05:30nice portrayal of a simple man ... and the small t...nice portrayal of a simple man ... and the small things that affect his life .. though felt a bit less scope for rainfall ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com