tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post4648665221519406606..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: No tomorrow...Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-56154487802890149012009-05-21T16:29:13.415+05:302009-05-21T16:29:13.415+05:30painful .sad
happened to my friend .... . she ...painful .sad<br /><br /> happened to my friend .... . she lost her boyfrndThe Solitary Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15512100204698797001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-14993650432961506442009-05-20T19:33:29.518+05:302009-05-20T19:33:29.518+05:30yeah, i will second Kaj, the last paragraph could ...yeah, i will second Kaj, the last paragraph could be skipped ..<br /><br />but then it is ur piece :) me likes anywayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-70055168020923561072009-05-20T19:04:48.461+05:302009-05-20T19:04:48.461+05:30Sensitive. 11.26 evokes depressing reactions.Sensitive. 11.26 evokes depressing reactions.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-54843845070037462442009-05-20T18:45:08.487+05:302009-05-20T18:45:08.487+05:30very tragic princess....very tragic princess....Dr.Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13667986692719342451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-43648120072615129542009-05-20T18:43:30.092+05:302009-05-20T18:43:30.092+05:30@Arjun: oh those words made me smile. Thanks..
I ...@Arjun: oh those words made me smile. Thanks..<br /><br />I wont ask u how u knw my age as all here do!Sonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-16356520419463482692009-05-20T18:42:59.054+05:302009-05-20T18:42:59.054+05:30@Ms.R: Thanks..i too cant imagine taht@Ms.R: Thanks..i too cant imagine tahtSonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-42037002530172670932009-05-20T18:42:40.673+05:302009-05-20T18:42:40.673+05:30@Prats: OO..thanks@Prats: OO..thanksSonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-70545853073521824492009-05-20T18:42:25.435+05:302009-05-20T18:42:25.435+05:30@Charrz: Thanks! I will do btr nxt time@Charrz: Thanks! I will do btr nxt timeSonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-90196620777371770542009-05-20T18:42:01.329+05:302009-05-20T18:42:01.329+05:30@Comfortably nimb: True@Comfortably nimb: TrueSonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-69876296800959690082009-05-20T18:41:34.683+05:302009-05-20T18:41:34.683+05:30@Arun: Thanks!!! Hheheh but do read them...@Arun: Thanks!!! Hheheh but do read them...Sonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-76328345070431437832009-05-20T18:33:52.474+05:302009-05-20T18:33:52.474+05:30u r too good for ur age Sonshu..!! Dont ask me how...u r too good for ur age Sonshu..!! Dont ask me how i kno ur age.. hehe :)<br /><br />Nice story here... U'll learn a lot in WL... That's the best part here.. :)<br /><br />Cheers..!!<br />ArjunArjunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03971404663142225199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-548973119637912972009-05-20T18:30:38.653+05:302009-05-20T18:30:38.653+05:30I can't imagine the pain of losing someone you lov...I can't imagine the pain of losing someone you love so dearly.. Nice one Sonshu :)The Great Brown Experimenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15228600300684197412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-63170751162089057532009-05-20T17:51:52.805+05:302009-05-20T17:51:52.805+05:30It hurts wen hopes and dreams die !! so beautifull...It hurts wen hopes and dreams die !! so beautifully written ..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-75337652833697540312009-05-20T17:30:50.666+05:302009-05-20T17:30:50.666+05:30A very well conceptualised story connecting with a...A very well conceptualised story connecting with a tragic real life incident..<br /><br />"she saw it..his picture..KILLED.."<br /><br />hard hitting lines..<br />n yea i agree wid Kajal tht ending thr wud hve been better..<br />Nevertheless i really liked it alot..<br />Cheers..Charu Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15559525834162137118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-56868390352721336732009-05-20T17:28:28.734+05:302009-05-20T17:28:28.734+05:30tragic indeed:(tragic indeed:(Saimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06266353622722897516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-39662586592858184132009-05-20T17:23:02.658+05:302009-05-20T17:23:02.658+05:30Nice story sonshu...
very depressing...fits teary ...Nice story sonshu...<br />very depressing...fits teary wednesday...<br />I also agree with pinky...some emotions are better left unsaid...but different people have different styles of writing...its upto u...<br /><br />hmmm.this teary wednesday is killing me...<br />am already sad n these bunch of stories are depressin me...have to stay away.. :-)Arun Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15632850254083824460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-49112206894280751022009-05-20T17:16:42.698+05:302009-05-20T17:16:42.698+05:30@The Pink Orchid: Oh thanks so much for telling an...@The Pink Orchid: Oh thanks so much for telling and pointing out my mistakes. Its a blessing to have teachers like you here. I will surely keep that in mind next time i write.Sonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-50017628507868279262009-05-20T17:15:18.928+05:302009-05-20T17:15:18.928+05:30@Aarthi: Thanks!@Aarthi: Thanks!Sonshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14919182641882600546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-32422252422848767272009-05-20T17:13:06.201+05:302009-05-20T17:13:06.201+05:30This one was teary indeed.. 'he saw it, his pictur...This one was teary indeed.. 'he saw it, his picture, killed'. The story could have ended right there.. Her emotions should have been left for the reader to imagine.. 'Killed' mentioned there hit me real hard. and I was like 'gosh what an end!' <br /><br /><br />Sandeep has taught me how to attempt fiction, till then I used to write only poetries. He always tells me that we should leave a lot of imagination to the readers' mind, only then he gets involved in the story and feels the expressions in a better way, than giving all the details..<br /><br /><br />Hugs Sonshu, I am a learner myself, what I've learnt I thought I'd convey to you..<br /><br />And we all know, that you are our lil angel who writes oh so beautifully..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-71340187534952459962009-05-20T16:36:48.575+05:302009-05-20T16:36:48.575+05:30Oh Sonshu,
The Taj episode again...but an insight...Oh Sonshu,<br /><br />The Taj episode again...but an insight into the lives of those who lost their loved ones in that attack...nicely done! :)<br /><br />Cheers<br /><br />*PEACE*Nyxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00384530455049386902noreply@blogger.com