tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post4406172653732895465..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: I fear ....Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-79861459888256309452009-05-27T18:03:11.897+05:302009-05-27T18:03:11.897+05:30Thanks Kumar and hashan !! :)Thanks Kumar and hashan !! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-90510867803528697212009-05-23T00:49:54.387+05:302009-05-23T00:49:54.387+05:30thanks Insi :)thanks Insi :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-76857809563451328702009-05-23T00:49:29.479+05:302009-05-23T00:49:29.479+05:30arrey no ,... no need to bow dear Mav !! thanks fr...arrey no ,... no need to bow dear Mav !! thanks fr the read :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-61155954061231763202009-05-22T23:31:43.201+05:302009-05-22T23:31:43.201+05:30Fantastic..it was a amazing read :)Fantastic..it was a amazing read :)hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-35698728667467829332009-05-22T22:27:22.232+05:302009-05-22T22:27:22.232+05:30@Pinkie : the fear is my own !! its not fiction..b...@Pinkie : the fear is my own !! its not fiction..but truth of my life :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-9610233336188064062009-05-22T22:26:46.474+05:302009-05-22T22:26:46.474+05:30and arun .. carotids wont be fun !! who will descr...and arun .. carotids wont be fun !! who will describe the death if the person dies soo fast ??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-59871528612896951252009-05-22T22:26:13.963+05:302009-05-22T22:26:13.963+05:30@Arun .. thanks for liking .. coming form someone ...@Arun .. thanks for liking .. coming form someone whose stories i love !! thanks again :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-9297329308550364402009-05-22T22:25:18.021+05:302009-05-22T22:25:18.021+05:30@Arjun .. i could make out the typo easily !! :)@Arjun .. i could make out the typo easily !! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-91036651496368026682009-05-22T21:08:04.658+05:302009-05-22T21:08:04.658+05:30Superb feel prats..... wat a love...Superb feel prats..... wat a love...Dr.Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13667986692719342451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-81566367983911681102009-05-22T20:59:15.079+05:302009-05-22T20:59:15.079+05:30AMAZING .. PRATZ..AMAZING .. PRATZ..I Zaydihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10156705691608858236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-9155153913173714742009-05-22T19:29:19.286+05:302009-05-22T19:29:19.286+05:30Awesome wrk, Prats! luvd da flow nd da feel! ident...Awesome wrk, Prats! luvd da flow nd da feel! identified wid da pain nd da fear! <br /><br />nd almost died wid her! :)<br /><br />marvellous! *bows*Maverickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442002151797497705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-76237255335095979942009-05-22T19:09:35.767+05:302009-05-22T19:09:35.767+05:30fantastic.. I could relate to the part where you d...fantastic.. I could relate to the part where you described 'fear' in the prescript.. <br /><br />wow! *bows*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-77466091849646479512009-05-22T19:08:06.375+05:302009-05-22T19:08:06.375+05:30oh im so in love with dark friday theme...loved th...oh im so in love with dark friday theme...loved the narration...i think the ending was good...i like short endings...makes the readers have their own opinion abt the story n ending.....<br /><br />n next time aim for the carotids in the neck...sure shot death in 2 mins... :-)Arun Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15632850254083824460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-32159566659429427622009-05-22T18:11:20.796+05:302009-05-22T18:11:20.796+05:30heheh.. I'm known as the Typo king.. u din't kno t...heheh.. I'm known as the Typo king.. u din't kno tat.. did u... :P<br /><br />Cheers..!!<br />ARJUN ;)Arjunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03971404663142225199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-35016726317733603892009-05-22T18:03:14.493+05:302009-05-22T18:03:14.493+05:30@Arkim ???? watever ... thanks fr the read and co...@Arkim ???? watever ... thanks fr the read and comemnts dude !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-24868579973451621292009-05-22T18:02:39.061+05:302009-05-22T18:02:39.061+05:30BTW, the godly intrevention was good ;) !! will re...BTW, the godly intrevention was good ;) !! will rememberit in next story :PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-56610351087086456992009-05-22T18:02:10.625+05:302009-05-22T18:02:10.625+05:30@H : now you see where i fall short .. in climax !...@H : now you see where i fall short .. in climax !! i can build a story well but not end it properly :( .. but then,,, i will still keep trying till i write a perfect one .. even its jsut 1 good story :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-32382617784521835572009-05-22T17:48:25.383+05:302009-05-22T17:48:25.383+05:30Lovely write Prats..!! It had sadness all over.......Lovely write Prats..!! It had sadness all over.... Well done.. :)<br /><br />Cheers..!!<br />ArkimArjunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03971404663142225199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-44757799184887433272009-05-22T17:41:11.004+05:302009-05-22T17:41:11.004+05:30Gripping!!
You write so well.
But in the end clima...Gripping!!<br />You write so well.<br />But in the end climax ends too quickly. And you immediately get to know that she lives again. Let her die for a while and then against her wishes God pulls her to the door to earth or something. :P saying "beta ye mai decide karunga kab kaun marega, aap jyaada tez mat bano :D"<br /><br />Just kidding.great story.hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14659338327208506746noreply@blogger.com