tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post2112743527638822421..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: Awaiting for sunrise !!Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-65873105788356639902009-04-13T15:38:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:38:00.000+05:30@ CharuThank u so much girl :)) always loves ur co...@ Charu<BR/><BR/>Thank u so much girl :)) always loves ur comments :)<BR/><BR/><BR/>@ Leo<BR/><BR/>Thank u Sir..u loved it.. its a nice appreciation for me :))hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-17246170042567427242009-04-13T15:36:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:36:00.000+05:30I know Prats.. Thanki once again for giving it a p...I know Prats.. Thanki once again for giving it a poem look :phasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-79343046169955810152009-04-13T15:35:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:35:00.000+05:30@ vitruvian boyhey u dint tell me your name :))n t...@ vitruvian boy<BR/><BR/>hey u dint tell me your name :))<BR/>n thank you for loving my poem.. u'l definitely get a great start..wishing u the best :))hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-59417522615763604092009-04-13T15:33:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:33:00.000+05:30@ I, Me and MyselfThank you for understood me :))@...@ I, Me and Myself<BR/><BR/>Thank you for understood me :))<BR/><BR/><BR/>@ Tan<BR/><BR/>Sirji..u are right in ur way :))hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-41719965948805445322009-04-13T15:31:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:31:00.000+05:30@ Ragpickern i am already a fan of urs..Thanks so ...@ Ragpicker<BR/><BR/>n i am already a fan of urs..Thanks so much for the suggestions :))<BR/><BR/>@ Asbah<BR/><BR/>No asbi..you're not sadist..you are the happiness yourself :)) maafi maafi if i made u sad :))hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-77115880747128322782009-04-13T15:29:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:29:00.000+05:30@ RagpickerBuddy..may be you are right !! i will u...@ Ragpicker<BR/><BR/>Buddy..may be you are right !! i will use your lines somewhere.hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-7103088662041861622009-04-13T15:28:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:28:00.000+05:30Thank you Nabila.. :))Thank you Nabila.. :))hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-41885781396275713562009-04-13T15:26:00.000+05:302009-04-13T15:26:00.000+05:30@ MohitaThank you so much girl u got my tempo :))@ Mohita<BR/><BR/>Thank you so much girl u got my tempo :))hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-78827961479863187572009-04-12T15:42:00.000+05:302009-04-12T15:42:00.000+05:30i second mohita,i cant believe this is ur first ei...i second mohita,<BR/><BR/>i cant believe this is ur first either! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-34876538911837989882009-04-11T15:35:00.000+05:302009-04-11T15:35:00.000+05:30Its a wonderful Frst attempt..yeah..Sometimes drea...Its a wonderful Frst attempt..<BR/>yeah..Sometimes dreams can take us to another world..<BR/><BR/>Keep writing..<BR/>Waiting to see more coming up..Charu Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15559525834162137118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-62210636721406505402009-04-11T01:56:00.000+05:302009-04-11T01:56:00.000+05:30u know i already loved it !!! :)u know i already loved it !!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-27022197457641160592009-04-11T01:28:00.000+05:302009-04-11T01:28:00.000+05:30A very good start....I liked it.... :)Hope i get a...A very good start....<BR/>I liked it.... :)<BR/><BR/>Hope i get a same start... :)<BR/><BR/>keep it up...The Vitruvian Boyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04224337599485967007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-60225137696597557832009-04-11T00:52:00.000+05:302009-04-11T00:52:00.000+05:30I do dream at times too... but whenever there is s...I do dream at times too... but whenever there is something I dont like, I want to wake up... Hope all evil things are dreams and we can wake up to a beautiful time - humesha!!Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613642883793373191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-3888581432252708692009-04-10T19:12:00.000+05:302009-04-10T19:12:00.000+05:30naa asbah u rnt a sadist dear...its very common......naa asbah u rnt a sadist dear...its very common...u wish that it wasnt a reality..dat u r still sleeping n ven u wake up everything is according to our wishes...but it hardly happens *sigh*<BR/><BR/>nywys i cant blv its ur first...its amazing...hats off so few lines n yet so deep...Tweetyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15370849911077398353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-53557102509524827842009-04-10T18:37:00.000+05:302009-04-10T18:37:00.000+05:30too good for a first one :)sometimes, you wake up ...too good for a first one :)<BR/><BR/>sometimes, you wake up from your dreams to a bleak nightmare, that leads to no further awakening<BR/><BR/>*sigh*!<BR/><BR/>and of course, i am a sadist.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-72127132468316121862009-04-10T18:27:00.000+05:302009-04-10T18:27:00.000+05:30Definitely a good one when its your first time. Du...Definitely a good one when its your first time. Dude poetry is nothing but thought evolution. Keep writing and you will eventually evolve with your words. As of me , I liked the non chaotic approach you have when it comes to depict a complex phenomenon like 'dream'.<BR/><BR/>The part where you say {{{<BR/>hope that everything<BR/>turns out non existent<BR/>wish its all fake ))))<BR/><BR/>It seemed so simple and profound. I usually encounter poets depicting this scenario rather more in a complex manner like<BR/>" illusions under a driftwood<BR/>touches the glass of reality<BR/>life moves as it should<BR/>but reflects a vague serenity "<BR/><BR/>It means the same as your lines but somehow more twisted and artificial complexity forcefully injected. I hope you get what I mean.<BR/><BR/>Keep writing bro - You have a fan here ;).Ragpickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03671627463067235800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-80132021185849996592009-04-10T18:25:00.000+05:302009-04-10T18:25:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Ragpickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03671627463067235800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-29627840116130810852009-04-10T18:24:00.000+05:302009-04-10T18:24:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Ragpickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03671627463067235800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-37661105417464118152009-04-10T17:10:00.000+05:302009-04-10T17:10:00.000+05:30wow..is it really ur first :O ...wish i had starte...wow..is it really ur first :O ...wish i had started with such great poems.....u write flawlessly like ur used to writing them...great going :-)mysterious galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09498778855432030397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-54170902820726628212009-04-10T17:05:00.000+05:302009-04-10T17:05:00.000+05:30I can't believe that its ur first!I loved the temp...I can't believe that its ur first!<BR/>I loved the tempo.<BR/>Way to go!Mohita Saxenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10440374834140564968noreply@blogger.com