tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post2046770828911045765..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: The mistake,man has done since Adam's...Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-88526024411250573692009-03-13T01:55:00.000+05:302009-03-13T01:55:00.000+05:30loved the poem.. got so much of depth.. hnnmmloved the poem.. got so much of depth.. hnnmmAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06146945834151448871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-49071504652862026172009-03-12T09:06:00.000+05:302009-03-12T09:06:00.000+05:30you amazed me with the deep sense and simplicity o...you amazed me with the deep sense and simplicity of this write :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-87756902576934880882009-03-12T01:06:00.001+05:302009-03-12T01:06:00.001+05:30ps. Loved the picture!ps. Loved the picture!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-45003239169652229002009-03-12T01:06:00.000+05:302009-03-12T01:06:00.000+05:30the words were just perfect!and excessive ambition...the words were just perfect!<BR/><BR/>and excessive ambitions,<BR/>lured easily by luxury,misgivings and myths..<BR/><BR/>loved these lines!<BR/>darkness is prevailing :(<BR/>even I am writing a lot abt it (althought not exactly the theme you've chosen!)<BR/><BR/>but do chk this: charcoals.blogspot.com first post called El-Dorado!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-83277631040576862372009-03-11T20:36:00.000+05:302009-03-11T20:36:00.000+05:30Am Moved Aftr ReadIn this No Words To Comment .......Am Moved Aftr ReadIn this <BR/>No Words To Comment .........<BR/>Crystal Gal u Rock....<BR/>KeeP posting Such MArveLlous POems.......SraVnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16830202379673443538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-70751612583615075182009-03-11T20:32:00.000+05:302009-03-11T20:32:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.SraVnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16830202379673443538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-2789046975585411752009-03-11T19:44:00.000+05:302009-03-11T19:44:00.000+05:30i am touched . Thanks for writing this one Crystal...i am touched . Thanks for writing this one Crystal Gal...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-18594796362041066552009-03-11T18:03:00.000+05:302009-03-11T18:03:00.000+05:30this is one soul rendering rendition....absolutely...this is one soul rendering rendition....absolutely beautiful ..loved it :-) .... i m actually speechless to comment more on it.....keep writing:-)mysterious galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09498778855432030397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-38504832190269996642009-03-11T16:07:00.000+05:302009-03-11T16:07:00.000+05:30feelings of anguish are so soul stirring.... wish ...feelings of anguish are so soul stirring.... wish we all realise soon enough and tread carefully than regret later... nice write gal.. hang on... there are many souls with ya :)Kings Chaoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09428021846428512346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-61181386579943845862009-03-11T11:28:00.000+05:302009-03-11T11:28:00.000+05:30Mav!!iam pleased tht u liked my poem.thanx for rea...Mav!!iam pleased tht u liked my poem.thanx for reading it..Reeha Sharonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14541267978888041615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-3618319967668911452009-03-11T11:26:00.000+05:302009-03-11T11:26:00.000+05:30hey aparna,thanq soo much for those kind words.hey aparna,thanq soo much for those kind words.Reeha Sharonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14541267978888041615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-73589077295886956702009-03-11T11:14:00.000+05:302009-03-11T11:14:00.000+05:30Wonderful poem! I agree with Aparna that its an ey...Wonderful poem! I agree with Aparna that its an eye opener for anyone! the fact that I am right now going through that conflict is something that can make me relate to this one! <BR/> M not letting my soul lose! Thnx fr putting the struggle into words! Luvd it! :)Maverickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442002151797497705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-55191417776188938352009-03-11T10:55:00.000+05:302009-03-11T10:55:00.000+05:30This poem serves to be an eye-opener for anyone wh...This poem serves to be an eye-opener for anyone who believe in transient materialistic pleasures rather than giving importance to simplicity and other virtues.<BR/><BR/>the conflict between mind and soul is unresolvble indeed...man has been performing this mistake since his creation on earth.<BR/><BR/>Nice description.Nice tinge of crisp diction. I could visualise the trepidition and desire for freedom of the character from the shackles of grief and torments.<BR/><BR/>No wonder you got 4th place in the poetry contest.Aparna (Life Takes)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10317107449181119426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-39923786324664005542009-03-11T10:32:00.000+05:302009-03-11T10:32:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Aparna (Life Takes)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10317107449181119426noreply@blogger.com