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November 13, 2009

Girl in the rain



There’s a girl in the rain
Hiding tears and her pain
I keep wondering
Who’s she?

Her hair is wet
She looks so great
I wish we’d met
Before.

She looks here and there
With eyes full of scare
There’s none around her
She’s alone.

I see through this glass
The distance between us
There’s a road I can’t pass
It’s jammed.

I can’t see her face
Amidst this menace
It’ll be real disgrace
If she leaves.

As she quiver
I step out of my car
And I walk towards her
In faith.

Seeing me come her way
She smiles at me, nay
She hurries away
In the rain.

Why would she just go?
I just want to know
Did she see me before?
Anyways…

There’s a girl in the rain
Hiding tears and her pain
I’ve a feeling within
That’s you!



...A dedication to myself and my beautiful wife on 12 years completion of our journey in love...

8 Shared Their Views:

Bindhu Unny said...

Beautiful lines! :)

ViDiShA said...

wow b'ful...

Thoorika said...

Sweet :) Congrats !!

Amity Me said...

that girl must be an apparition of your past love...:)

careful!

this post, i like it really!

Tan said...

Thank you people..

And Thoorika, thanks for that 'Congrats' :D I wish it converts to 24, 36 ... 120 soon!!

SP said...

congrats to the beautiful couple. beautiful lines tan.. wish u a very happy many many years together.. always... :)

Tan said...

Thanks Sona Ma'am :) Thanks a lot for the wishes...

Meow said...

A beautiful Dedication for your love... As you wish it will become 24,36.... 120 soon :D and this is very cute..

 
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